i wrote a poem about the holocaust for school, i was wundering wht u guys think of it
here it is:
“Stories of a End”
I have heard stories of a cattle car,
This cattle car is full to the top with meat,
The meat of many, many people I mean,
The meat has many stars amongst it,
Many stars of David,
So everyone knows how to treat them.
I have heard stories of a body,
A body not far from the ground,
There isn’t much to say about the body,
The body hangs, so we can see,
So we can observe what we don’t want to be,
What we must work not to be,
What we live not to be.
I have heard stories of a furnace,
A furnace of hot flames, with death,
The furnace never stops burning, for death,
They never stop using the furnace, much death,
The furnace is well known,
It is a way of passing, passing massacres,
Passing lives,
Passing ashes,
Pray you don’t have to pass it.
I have heard many stories,
I pray these stories are not true.
what do you guys think?
here it is:
“Stories of a End”
I have heard stories of a cattle car,
This cattle car is full to the top with meat,
The meat of many, many people I mean,
The meat has many stars amongst it,
Many stars of David,
So everyone knows how to treat them.
I have heard stories of a body,
A body not far from the ground,
There isn’t much to say about the body,
The body hangs, so we can see,
So we can observe what we don’t want to be,
What we must work not to be,
What we live not to be.
I have heard stories of a furnace,
A furnace of hot flames, with death,
The furnace never stops burning, for death,
They never stop using the furnace, much death,
The furnace is well known,
It is a way of passing, passing massacres,
Passing lives,
Passing ashes,
Pray you don’t have to pass it.
I have heard many stories,
I pray these stories are not true.
what do you guys think?