need opinions on some of my raps

D CeLpH M · Jul 8, 2010

so ive started writin songs.. met this kid from boston who is ranked number 3 in the world for best unsigned writers in the world for rappers.. kinda inspired me.. lemme kno wat u think

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Mind Games<o

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Yea ive been tryna live life <o

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But man it gets hard when u think u found the one<o

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u try to have some fun<o

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But u start to rush it<o

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Like a motha fuckin rush hour<o

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That’s not what I call fun<o

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I wish it was sweet<o

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But man its just sour<o

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I feel like im fallin like the Twin Towers<o

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U got ur hopes up for nothin<o

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She don’t give u nothin<o

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U try to keep ur head up <o

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Hangin with ur friends<o

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But the road just bends<o

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Why cant u just send (me away)<o

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memories mess u up<o

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They tell u wats up<o

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U begin to curse<o

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Then u take it back<o

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But no matter what u do its impossible<o

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I wish addidas was right with “impossible is nothing”<o

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But that’s just a saying <o

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Id do anything for u<o

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My friends say u know<o

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But how do they know<o

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I wish I could be stronger<o

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When it comes to love<o

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All I do is pray to the heavens above<o

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Chorus:<o

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This is harder than it seems<o

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U messin with my mind (mind games)<o

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It is just a grind<o

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What do I do?<o

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Do I really need you?<o

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All I need is u<o

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I hope u know that too<o

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Cuz it would be sad<o

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And I would cry, not just a tad<o

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If we never talk again<o

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That is all I fear<o

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Imma need a few beers<o

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I don’t wanna lose ya<o

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But stop playin games<o

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Cuz u playin with my mind<o

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I just cant take it<o

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Not knowin what to think <o

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U tell me ur ready<o

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Then u change ur mind<o

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Just playin with my mind<o

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Do I really deserve this?<o

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Why do I keep up with this?<o

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There must be a reason<o

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Ur mind changes like the mothafuckin seasons<o

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U say u like me<o

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So why not commit?<o

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Yea its all mind games<o

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Stop playin with me.<o

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Chorus:<o

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This is harder than it seems<o

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U messin with my mind (mind games)<o

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It is just a grind<o

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What do I do?<o

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Do I really need you?<o

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I cant keep my mind off u<o

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No matter what I do<o

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Id do anything for u<o

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I just wanna see u<o

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Is that too much to ask?<o

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I’ll just crack into my flask<o

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If u keep lyin to me sayin maybe<o

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Then not getti nback to me<o

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What am I supposed to think?<o

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I guess I gotta keep the faith<o

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I gotta do this for my own sake<o

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Cuz my life’s at stake.<o

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Chorus: This is harder than it seems<o

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U messin with my mind (mind games)<o

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It is just a grind<o

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What do I do?<o

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Do I really need you?<o

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I start to think do I really need u?<o

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U treat me like shit<o

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Seems u don’t care one bit<o

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I may just throw a fit<o

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But is it really worth it<o

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Nah I don’t think so<o

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Imma go out the do(door)<o

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And shut it in ur face<o

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And in a few weeks<o

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U gon be wishin’ I wasn’t fishin<o

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For those other fishes<o

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Who will treat me betta<o

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Uve been warned several times<o

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Changin ur mind just to mess with mine<o

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Im tellin u I’ve had enough (and im out)<o

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D CeLpH M · Jul 8, 2010

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Summer Time<o

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Verse 1:<o

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Man I love this time<o

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Havin fun all the time<o

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Livin like theres no such thing as time<o

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Don’t needa check my watch<o

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My parents on the watch<o

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Tellin em im somewhere<o

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When im really elsewhere<o

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Feel like I got nothing to fear<o

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Goin to parties<o

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Drinkin them beers<o

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And sippin on them mixtures<o

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Playin that pong<o

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Ballin like im Lebron<o

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Dancin to them songs<o

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Got nothing on my mind<o

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But livin that life<o

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In the summer time<o

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Feelin good all day<o

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Yea man no worries<o

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Don’t even needa play hooky<o

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Bumpin in the hummer<o

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The celts lost, bummer<o

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But man its alright cuz it’s the summer<o

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Chorus:<o

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Yea it’s the summer <o

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U got all ur homies<o

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That’s all u really need<o

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Time to get wasted<o

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And party all night<o

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Verse 2:<o

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Hopin u dig this<o

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Like a mole diggin holes<o

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Not talkin bout chemistry<o

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Just want u to feel me<o

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This alcohol is healin me<o

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And this chick be feelin me<o

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And im feelin u<o

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Not here to get tied down<o

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Just here to get down<o

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And tip a couple back<o

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With all my homies <o

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there aint nothin that I lack<o

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Whatever it takes<o

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Look at that booty shake<o

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Ur head starts to ache<o

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But u aint stoppin<o

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Keep takin them shots, straight vodka<o

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Ur heart starts stoppin<o

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But ur head keeps goin<o

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Ur homies help u up<o

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U tell em wassup<o

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And get anotha cup<o

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Yea yea drink it up<o

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Chorus: Yea it’s the summer <o

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U got all ur homies<o

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That’s all u really need<o

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Time to get wasted<o

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And party all night<o

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Verse 3:<o

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The party keeps goin<o

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Till the early mornin<o

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U been tipsy for awhile<o

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Not thinkin straight<o

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U don’t even have a state<o

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The next day u wake up late<o

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Hear of another party<o

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Yea u wont be tardy<o

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Cuz u party hardy<o

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U walk in <o

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Time to do this again<o

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Time to get this party started<o

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No black eyed peas (haha hehe)<o

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Bouncin these balls <o

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Like Courtney Lee<o

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That’s 2 cups<o

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You scream waddup<o

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Girls be grindin<o

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Othas on the sideline<o

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Outside lookin in<o

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Wantin to get some<o

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Walk up like waddup hun<o

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Next thing they kno<o

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They get shunned<o

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Chorus: Yea it’s the summer <o

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U got all ur homies<o

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That’s all u really need<o

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Time to get wasted<o

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And party all night<o

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D CeLpH M · Jul 8, 2010

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Thanks Again<o

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Intro (Talking):<o

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Yo this song goes out to the homies<o

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Who’ve been there for me thru thick and thin<o

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Its time for me to say thanks again <o

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Check it check it (here we go)<o

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Verse 1:<o

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Yea I gotta thank all y’all <o

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For helpin me to stand tall<o

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Even wen im about to fall<o

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Ud do anything for me<o

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Id do anything for u<o

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I guess that’s why we’re homies<o

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U kno everything about me<o

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And help me to see<o

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Wen I aint seein right<o

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Help me to see the light<o

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At the end of the tunnel<o

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And we know how to have fun<o

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We shud drink from a funnel<o

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All I gotta say is thanks again<o

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Chorus: Thanks again to the homies<o

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For bein the ones to show me<o

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How to think and how to see<o

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And how to be the real me<o

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Verse 2:<o

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We livin in the suburbs<o

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We kno wats up (yea word)<o

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We flyin high like em birds<o

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Not one have we said them words<o

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Nah not once cursed<o

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I hope u like this verse<o

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Remember all the good times<o

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Forget all the bad<o

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We better not part cuz man thatd be sad<o

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Nah not one tear<o

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Live life with no fear<o

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Crack open a beer<o

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And I hope u can hear<o

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Me say thanks again<o

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So imma say it once more<o

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Thanks again<o

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Chorus:<o

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Thanks again to the homies<o

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For bein the ones to show me<o

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How to think and how to see<o

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And how to be the real me<o

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Verse 3:<o

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If one day I do become famous<o

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I hope u all remember this<o

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Im convinced its my time <o

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To become a star and shine<o

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Its time to make my dream a reality<o

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And keep doin nothing but me<o

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Finale (Talking):<o

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I cant thank u guys enough<o

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For helpin me wen times are rough<o

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BUHFALO · Jul 8, 2010

personally....i think some of the lines are wack.....but i mean i couldnt do any better so i dunno, just givin my feedback

DM4L SK · Jul 8, 2010

I love you bro<3

D CeLpH M · Jul 8, 2010

well at least theyre stories ..not like lil wayne who just rhymes and makes no sense.. nicki minaj=worst rapper ever

BUHFALO · Jul 8, 2010

how does he not make any sense? yeah some of his songs are like that, but alot of them are from his past experiences and now

BUHFALO · Jul 8, 2010

anyway lil wayne isnt even my favorite rapper, Eminem will always be the best rapper in my mind, and noone will change that

DM Michigan · Jul 8, 2010

D CeLpH M said:
well at least theyre stories ..not like lil wayne who just rhymes and makes no sense.. nicki minaj=worst rapper ever

Wait, "I'm on a boat" wasn't revealing the true meaning of life?

D CeLpH M · Jul 8, 2010

DM GR8NESS said:
how does he not make any sense? yeah some of his songs are like that, but alot of them are from his past experiences and now

like he has 3 lines that come together and make sense but wen it comes to the whole song it doesnt come together and he focuses on rhymes.. and lmfao feagle

DM Sandman · Jul 8, 2010

DM Michigan said:
Wait, "I'm on a boat" wasn't revealing the true meaning of life?

LMFAO!!!!!

RizZaHReCToR · Jul 9, 2010

Not bad at all. Enjoyed it.

cap off your verse's with a "biatch!", the folks love that.

Eminem is overrated. I'm fuckin sick of all these kids saying he's the best rapper alive when they've probably only heard 5% of the talent out there.

Listen to Rakim, Big Daddy Kane, Royce da 5'9, Canibus, Black Thought, Biggie's WHOLE catalog (not just the shit they play on hot 97), Percee P, Masta Ace, Boots Riley, Q-Tip, Talib Kweli, Mos Def, i can go on forever -_-

after you have enough hiphop in your soul, MAYBE il respect your opinion on whos the best.

BUHFALO · Jul 9, 2010

ive herd all of them, ive liked eminem ever since he came out, i said to me hes the best, everyone has their own opinion

D CeLpH M · Jul 9, 2010

thanks hova haha. check out this kid from boston i met. hes in a little duo called bliss.. this is his older shit cuz this singer left but he found a new guy and they got 2 shows comin up.

http://www.reverbnation.com/main/gl...6575:1pb4s9zvxde&cof=FORID:11#/blissentonline

DM xDarkKx · Jul 9, 2010

DM Michigan said:
Wait, "I'm on a boat" wasn't revealing the true meaning of life?

"IM ON A BOAT MOTHAFUCKA!" lmao i love that lyric.and LMAO at ur post mich XD

RizZaHReCToR · Jul 9, 2010

wow, hes really good.

i like "My Way", really good production.
other songs were really good too, not really my kind of music though.

I havent heard too many people from Boston...just Reks, and just like 2 or 3 songs.

Guru (RIP) is from Boston, i think, but he lived in NY most his life.

To comment on some previous posts...
I like Wayne. I cant say he has no talent. He has managed to convince an entire generation of children that he is exceptional at rhyming.

He has a few really good verses though. I'll say i like...10% of his stuff. But the best? not even top 20.

and eminem first "came out" in 96, im sure you werent listening to him back then, considering you cant be much older than i am.

BUHFALO · Jul 9, 2010

are u kidding me? i guarentee i was listening to him, my uncle got his first album, and i listened to it all the time with him, yeah i was 8 years old, but i knew almost all of the lyrics

so dont tell me what i did or didnt do, alrite cool homie

D CeLpH M · Jul 13, 2010

yea dude im goin to that kids concert on thursday and his other one on saturday im pumped. VIP on thursday and possibly on saturday too haha

DM PH · Jul 13, 2010

Good stories and lyrics-Ares

As for Em, Hes overrated and he knows it himself. But hes still a great rapper well atleast he was in the past.

AceLeXx · Jul 13, 2010

what up ares its CoN nice job for a white boy lol!! and ares is right a decent amount of lil waynes songs are about just drugs and money and cars they dont all have a meaning and most of his new shit is just garbage like with that song with nicki manija or w.e the hell her name is and him trying to be a rockstar like what the fuck are you doing stick to rap.. his shit was really nice back when fireman came out i remember going to see it in concert shit was fresh... but ya his songs back then and older where hot.. but now some of it is just like what are you thinking but ya nice job ares and ph i think your right every1 thinks he so great cause he can rap so fast.. i think he is overrated as well he was also better back in the day when he was on drugs....... like that not afraid song its was nice but way to overrated in my opinion

need opinions on some of my raps

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